Closing One Eye
Time is ticking the tock away,
This one-sided battle lasting night and day.
There’s two seconds to go before ends split -
Let go of my hand before pain insists.
Your smile had that way of cheering me, so,
But now I can’t see it; can’t feel it’s glow.
Closing one eye was cunning of you,
But I closed the other, as it was way overdue.
FIN
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And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
I couldn't word it properly though without the rhythm sounding off. =/
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"Out Damned Spot!"
"Closing one eye was cunning of you,
I closed the other, it was way overdue."
I have half the mind to suggest using "'Twas" XD;;;
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And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
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Fanfiction: [link]
Give me the Winchesters and chocolate, and no one need be injured.
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"Out Damned Spot!"
It would work, probably.
Thanks for the suggestion!
I'll try it out.
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"Out Damned Spot!"
just. fucking. brilliant.
(sorry for swearing, but that line needed to be really, really expressed as being brilliant in exactly that way)
that line is gonna stay in my head for weeks. GOOD DAMN WORK!!!
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"just another dead fag to you... but I'm glad you're on my side"
=RawEm0tion =Writers-Club ~The-Last-Stanza ~writeaway =PoetryPlease
I fucking liked that line, too. =^-^=
Ps. I'm all for swearing.
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"Out Damned Spot!"
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